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Fall of Equestria: New Dawn Chapter 4
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Twilight sat on the steps of town hall, now a temporary base for Ponyville's liberators, her previously bare chest now covered in Flash's dragon scale leather jacket. There was a whole lot to take in. Shining Armor was leading the rebellion. A rebellion complete with their own mobile suits and flying battleships to counter the Caribou's own. This was... unbelievable. Everything she was seeing now was against everything she'd seen with her own eyes for the last five years. All the while; allied Mobile suits moved through the streets and civilians headed for the huge battleship that had landed outside of town. Shining Armor stepped
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The Phillipverse: Headcanon notes
Show continuity
The Phillipverse is a close-to-canon alternate universe. Basically, if it happened in the show, it happened in the Phillip Finder series, although not always in the exact same way. Some, but not all, of the comics events are included as well. However, there are some differences:
Discord was not freed and rehabilitated after his first return. He is still a statue in the Canterlot Gardens.
Twilight used a gift from her friends as the final key to unlock the chest during Tirek's rampage.
After The Blue Moon Brings Death, which takes place between Season 4 and Season 5, Flash Sentry became Twilight's bodyguard and accompanied
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The Friendship Initiative: Prologue
This is a sequel to "The Last Cutie Mark Crusader". You may want to read that first before starting this or risk confusion of coming into the middle of something. I’d like to make a very special thanks to my momma mare and Dashiesplash (fanfiction.net) who have both been an immeasurable source of support on this project. ... Once upon a time, in the magical land of Equestria... The sun burned brightly overhead, punishing everyone below with its scorching heat. The changeling, Ash Eater, coughed on the cloud of dust that was kicked up as his Shock Force, over half a million timberwolves and tens of thousands of changeling warriors, marched north toward Ponyville. The latest reports from their scouts indicated that the ponies dwindling contingent, their ‘Assault Corps’, was setting up defensive lines to slow the advance. After the defeat they had suffered at Apple Loosa, the ponies were not likely to be baited into holding any position long-term again. Driving toward the nearest
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It's getting heavy now! Stories are set to collide, as Equestrian Knights rushes toward its explosive conclusion!
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Vision: As we rush towards the thrilling conclusion, I find myself feeling apprehensive owing to be unable to tell who'll be left standing at the end of the day.
Originality: Using Pinkie-speak in the context we saw meshes nicely with the allusion towards Silent Ponyville; that's because the old is combined in a new way.
Technique: Showing us what motivates Shining Armor makes him more than the flat character we saw on television; he becomes someone with something to fight for, to fight against.
Impact: Things look pretty bleak right now but the old saw about the darkest hour being before dawn is about to come into play.