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Here it is! The long-heralded, long-awaited culmination of Iron Mare, Lancer, and so many other short stories!

The Crusaders!

Edit: I touched up Doctor Doom's features after a... certain season premier was watched.

Edit: by the way, the awesome cover art was done by the most awesome [link] who was nice enough to let me use it. Go check him out!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Well, well, well...you've managed to combine both The Avengers film and the Avengers tv show quite well.

Okay, break down time:

Galaxy: So, it seems she's just as vain and lazy as before? GOOD. That means there's tons of room for that wonderful thing known as character development.

Quick note: "any half-good looking Stallion or even Mare that came along"? Wow. She really needs to solve that little problem.

Glory: Again, great work, wish we had more of her though. But the little we've had so far is quite good.

Orien: NO! NOT ORIEN! HE GOT BORMIRED! (An awesome character who dies for a noble cause)

Loki: All I have to say is <img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/l/o/l…" alt=":iconlokidplz:" title="lokidplz" /><img class="avatar" src="a.deviantart.net/avatars/t/o/t…" alt=":icontomhiddlestonplz:" title="TomHiddlestonPlz" />

So, once again, great work. I can't wait for Chapter two!

I do wonder though, does Loki's staff still do that mind control thing? Cause if he mind controlled Galaxy that would be unbelievably awesome. In that evil villain sort of way.

NITPICKS:

This is just me, but I do feel it moves a little fast, but then again, this is only Chapter One.


Keep up the good work.